Rewrite Experiance

 

Today I have experienced rewriting one of my blogs. I rewrote it using the guidelines that my fellow classmates have written on one of my previous blogs in the comment section. They gave me great advice that I will try my best to follow for the future reference. They told me what I did good and what I have to improve on for my future blogs. It was a very interesting experience that I didn’t have much in my previous schools.

In secondary and primary school, the only people that gave me feedback were my teachers but gaining feedback from people from my class was quite useful in helping me with my rewrite. The thing that I had to really improve on was adding my own opinion. While rewriting my blog I tried my best to give as much of my own opinion as possible. I’m not exactly sure if the newer version was any better or worse, but I think that I have definitely improved.

The experience, as I said, was very fascinating as I could see all of my mistake from more then one person’s view. From now on I will try my absolute best to keep those insights ion mind when writing and rewriting my future blogs.

Before I rewrote my blog, I read four short articled that helped me a bit to improve my blogs.

 Writing strong paragraphs: Paragraph Structure

https://libguides.newcastle.edu.au/writing-paragraphs/structure

Nine Basic Ways to Improve Your Style in Academic Writing

https://slc.berkeley.edu/writing-worksheets-and-other-writing-resources/nine-basic-ways-improve-your-style-academic-writing

Paragraph-Level Revision

https://slc.berkeley.edu/writing-worksheets-and-other-writing-resources/paragraph-level-revision

Dealing with Sentence-Level Issues

https://slc.berkeley.edu/writing-worksheets-and-other-writing-resources/dealing-sentence-level-issues