Another Revision

This time for my blog review I didn’t receive any feedback from anyone. But even though I got no feedback I still used my previous experience of receiving feedback in order to rewrite my one of my blog posts. With that said I did get a chance at giving feedback to two other people that are from my course which also helped me review my own blog.

I have also read an article of sorts and two other pages about writing a paper: revision and the academic phrasebank. They were useful to help me rewrite my old blog post.

Academic Phrasebank is a general resource for academic writers. It aims to provide you with examples of some of the 'nuts and bolts' of writing. The phrases can be used simply to assist you in thinking about the content and organisation of your own writing.

What I learned from rewriting it is how different it was from my current blogs. I haven’t included much of my personal opinion at all, and I most definitely didn’t cite my sources well enough. But I have learned from my mistakes, and I will continue improving my writing skills as I go along.

 

Kirton, Bill. Brilliant Academic Writing, Pearson Education Limited, 2012. ProQuest Ebook Central, http://ebookcentral.proquest.com/lib/itb/detail.action?docID=5175259 Created from itb on 2021-09-22 19:46:39.

Writing a paper: Revision

https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/writingprocess/revising

Academic Phrasebank

https://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/